Open Poetry #47 |
Giving Without Remembering, Taking Without Forgetting |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Giving Without Remembering, Taking Without Forgetting By: Lisping Hibiscus 12/23/05 What if there were no holly tree, that could nestle you from life's debris, no camel coerced to cross the wide desert, with no hump to quell the insatiable thirst, what if you refused to go out one frigid night, only to wake to see opportunity glide away like a kite... …only to be left peering every young face, just to find... . . . . . …what if I was forgiven only to forget, found any resolve dissolve like a vignette, what if forgiveness came wrapped in an excuse, with no golden truth or higher self suffused, what if you refused to go out one frigid night, only to wake to see opportunity glide away like a kite... …only to be left peering every young face, just to invite... . . . . . By lighting another candle, a candle loses nothing, cast a shadow, gaze upon animations of blessings, for where your treasure is, there your heart will be, oh, you will gain ever more when you keep giving freely, giving without remembering, taking without forgetting... . . The best gift I could ever give, would be for you to stare into my eyes, and show you that you live, no two snowflakes could ever be the same, that's how I recognize the face within every miracle made, what if you refused to go out one frigid night, only to wake to see opportunity glide away like a kite... …only to be left peering every young face, just to invite... By lighting another candle, a candle loses nothing, cast a shadow, gaze upon animations of blessings, for where your treasure is, there your heart will be, oh, you will gain ever more when you keep giving freely, giving without remembering, taking without forgetting... * By lighting another candle, a candle loses nothing, cast a shadow, gaze upon animations of blessings, for where your treasure is, there your heart will be, righteousness will tinkle like silver bells in the city, giving without remembering, taking without forgetting... * "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very beautiful, dear Noah. A highly significant invitation to ponder on this Christmas day. Margherita |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Merry Christmas, Noah... Indeed, where your treasure lies, there your heart will be also. Thank you my friend for this reminder. Michael |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Giving Without Remembering, Taking Without Forgetting" This says it all.Nice work Noah. jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
quote: This line really jumps out at me, loved reading this very much, well done! Love is the life of the soul... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Very nicely done, Noah |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
By lighting another candle, a candle loses nothing, cast a shadow, gaze upon animations of blessings, for where your treasure is, there your heart will be, oh, you will gain ever more when you keep giving freely, giving without remembering, taking without forgetting... This is as beautiful as your big heart... I loved it from title through last line! *S* |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...Hi old friend. Great to hear from you. As always your writting amazes me.Happy Holidays and thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful write! Happy New Year!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
my darling friend Noah.. this is such beauty in these words... loved reading you! Happy New Year to you! Bisous RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome My spirit will rise |
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