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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-12-23 10:15 PM

       'Endless' Mt. Forests

Here ...

I become the deep-forest path
  to nowhere
in answer to the siren call
of this limpid December night
and the few soft-velvet clouds
  of late-evening grey
that sail the infinite oceans of
  space and time
with a fine, mystic moon
and the dance of shadows
to the forgiving starry silence
of Nature's immeasurable truths.

                 --- b. e. adams (12/23/2011)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-25 06:21 AM

You make me feel part of your nature dream and I am sailing along across the infinite oceans of space and time ....

Very beautiful!

Merry Christmas!

Love and peace.
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2011-12-25 03:58 PM

Another poem of grace an beauty, Bruce. Merry Christmas to you
Ida

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2011-12-26 08:32 AM

I loved how you opened with this, becoming the path, and the symbolism it plays through the poem. The poem itself is very serene, and peaceful - very much 'larger' than we are, in it's simplicity. Very nicely done.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-12-26 03:06 PM

wonderful and enlightning, thanks bruce for the very enjoyable read

yann

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2011-12-26 05:19 PM

One of your best, Bruce - possibly your very best, in my humble opinion.

Owl

Abe
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since 2003-05-28

Posts 694
Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

6 posted 2011-12-26 06:26 PM

Sorry! Didn't hit "Reply" button first.

Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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Abe
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since 2003-05-28

Posts 694
Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

7 posted 2011-12-27 09:48 AM

Here's what was supposed to be in reply >
"Very nice!
Might like this http://mountsthelens.com/mt-st-helens-poem.html "

Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-12-28 02:32 AM

Exceptionally beautiful, Bruce.

A

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

9 posted 2011-12-29 03:09 PM

gotta love those siren calls. This is beautiful, secondhand~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-01-02 09:11 PM

Excellent nature treated poetry. Every line was steeped in nature's many mysteries and worthwhileness.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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