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Winters Thaw
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Winters Thaw |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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give everything time to chill itself down or heat up, you know a carpe diem moment use it like a philter your life is still extant don't rush in like the philistines stony mien spring of life is done looking forward to a dying autumn, winter bleakly staring at colder threat to my cherish conceit remembering my tears for the peace she unwittingly provided to me sans flesh brown wavy hair caressed my gaze parted on the side fell onto her breasts tingle her lipsticked smile simply overpowered my personal she opened her mouth to discharge a blue moan eye contact; another smile hands searching my pride touching my heart break all in the spell of tomorrow ©December 22, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, this is all a fluttering of butterflies and your outlook to Spring at the beginning of Winter ensures you both your mental as well as your physical health. By envisioning future heart breaks, we anticipate so to say the coldness of Winter, so just wrap that vision into a very thick cover of mist and then let it melt away by the piercing sunshine of the Now! Again, you did a great job, Jerry! Margherita  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You comments are pleasing to these old ears, Margherita. You do know how to cut the chaff from the wheat, and I think you for it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wonderfully penned and most enjoyed - thanks Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, tracie66, it is much appreciated. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
you see...you had me at...philter. No girl can turn that down.... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yer gotta point, Baby Girl, gotta watch out for those philters, they can cause trouble . . . Thank you for digging this one up and giving it some life. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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