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Open Poetry #47

Magnetic Cohesion

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-12-21 03:59 PM

MAGNETIC COHESION
21 December 2011

Their rendezvous was
by mistake as planned
and aftershave and perfume
matched each other
in laughter and ecstasy
in hypnotising eye caresses
and skin speak
which stroked the bound carriers
and he knew
in his bones,
no matter his pat-flecked cinder talk
that she only had eyes
and arms
and thoughts
and lips
for him.

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2011-12-21 09:44 PM

finely Romantic !

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-12-22 03:01 PM

Thank you, Bruce.

Owl

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2011-12-23 12:04 PM

if I had to pick a line
I couldn't.
beautiful work Diana.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-12-23 12:49 PM

As usual ... enjoyed your flair, my friend.

j.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2011-12-23 12:50 PM

a great little read, love it

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-12-23 03:59 AM

Thank you, Kate, Jimmy and Tracie, for your kind words.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2011-12-23 05:37 AM

quote:
in hypnotising eye caresses

This just hypnotizes me!

Most lovely.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-12-23 07:03 AM

Thank you, Margherita.

Hugs
Owl

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