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Krawdad
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0 posted 2011-12-21 01:14 AM



      Once Upon a Winter


      For all of those on the north side of the mid line
      of the slightly-bulged-like-an-unkempt-belly line
      this is the short straw
      the late morning and the early night
      and for some the middle of the all night
      and the missing of the light

      This is the dreaded in the coming
      and the hopeful in the passing
      the lighting of the annual candles
      and the long night's slumber
      this is the celebration of the end
      but only because it is the beginning



  
      Y'all have a merry nice Winter Solstice
      and a Good Light to all!






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OLIAS
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1 posted 2011-12-21 04:59 AM


Nice work

and a good light and pleasant dreams to you

ice
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2 posted 2011-12-21 05:03 AM


Excellent poem-enjoyed
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-12-21 01:35 PM


Most beautifully composed, dear Krawdad!

Winter celebrations have their magic which makes people endure more easily coldness and darkness.

Enjoy the candle time!

Margherita

JL
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4 posted 2011-12-21 06:55 PM


And a Merry Christmas to you, my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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5 posted 2011-12-22 12:17 PM


Merry Christmas, Krawdad!! I wish the best for you and yours. *S*
1slick_lady
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6 posted 2011-12-22 02:33 PM


you have a way of making anything cold
warm

tracie66
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7 posted 2011-12-23 12:49 PM


the same goes to you

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



jwesley
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8 posted 2011-12-23 01:26 AM


Ah, wonderful thoughts, my friend, that I toss back to you with a sky full of stars...

j.

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2011-12-23 02:28 AM


Merry Winter Soltice to you, Krawdad.
                                    iDA

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