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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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you know your times up when the only one older than you is Almighty God still you can walk and talk your mind is still nimble not gone to gray oatmeal it lets you sit and ponder about the fire and the rain how'll it end - with a bang active mind begs questions where did it all really begin who was its rightful author or products of ooze and mud I have one more question I would really like answered who were the ones invented the one and only original sin I'd smile and shake their hands ©December 18, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Gotta love it Jerry! You blind sided me with that last line. Ha!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Then I did good, huh? Thank you Lori, for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"lets you sit and ponder about the fire and the rain how'll it end" Nice write Jerry. This line stood out as a key to the answer. Enjoyed!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your contribution to my poem, JL. I know where your heart is in this question. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I've seen fire and I've seen rain I've seen sunny days that I thought would never end... I think I'd shake a hand or two myself |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I do believe I've heard that song somewhere before, passing shadows. Thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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