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Open Poetry #47

The Wind and I

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-01-25 04:12 PM

The umbrella slightly folded
Under the rainfall
Hands traded signs

He took her hands off the cement
Where each point of her tip
Left a little indent

There was a slight scratch
Along the left corner of her leg
An uneven bridge
From the bottom of her feet
To the top of her cheeks

She was a bit hunched over
A bit uneasy
But the wind saw a woman of the night

As it grazed around the corner of the stores
She felt it suddenly touch her
Breezing in and out
Of her white tank-top

With his hand inside hers
The wind watching over her
As if she was engraved in the sky
With strands of her hair
Weaving through the clouds.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-01-25 07:21 PM

This is an awesome poem. I loved the imagery. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2011-01-26 02:37 PM

Happy you enjoyed the imagery, Doctors...hope all is well

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-01-26 05:54 PM

Enjoyed...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2011-01-27 12:12 PM

Thanks, James..hope all is well

Cheers

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