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Open Poetry #47

You think ...?

chickoo007
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 70
India

0 posted 2011-12-16 05:15 AM

You think I need a reason,
To see your beautiful smile?
You think I need excuses,
To be with you for a while?

You think I need a question
To know your love for me?
You think I need a seer,
To say that we will be?

You think I need my eyes,
To look at your tender face?
You think I need to see,
To know your graceful ways?

You think I need music,
To dance when I am with you?
You think I need something more,
To know our love is true?

You think my love needs a reason?
You think our love needs a rhyme?
The smile that I see on your face...
Is enough to tell me you are mine...!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-16 05:19 AM

Lovely rhyme and isn't it just good to have such certainty!

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-12-16 08:07 AM

Sometimes the obvious, is jut . . . Obvious. Nicely worded and rhymed.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Echo Bleu
Junior Member

since 2011-12-09

Posts 19

3 posted 2011-12-18 03:02 PM

Awww, I really liked your poem it was cute and very nicely rhymed!

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