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Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

0 posted 2011-12-13 10:45 PM

Here I sit lonely and sad.
Only for a bit did I add,
these feelings I have inside
with a bit of rhythm and rhyme.
From the start all looks fair,
deeper you go the worse the air.
Rhythm ran wild leaving rhyme far behind.
To see one by itself is sad,
when apart it is bad.
Together they must be, for
there not to be a fee. Oh
these feelings would be great, if
rhythm and rhyme would co-operate.

© Copyright 2011 Zackery A. Sanders - All Rights Reserved

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-12-13 11:08 PM

There always has to be a party-pooper, and in this case it looks like you have two of them.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

2 posted 2011-12-13 11:09 PM

Haha yes, but in this case its a little bigger than that.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

3 posted 2011-12-29 02:57 PM

loving the melody and the honesty~ well done, Poet~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2011-12-29 09:28 PM

"rhythm and rhyme would co-operate."

We don't need no stinking co-operation...

Just
Let it all go like you did here.
Enjoyed!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2011-12-30 04:52 AM

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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