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JL
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0 posted 2011-12-07 09:24 AM





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Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

© Copyright 2011 JL - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-12-07 09:32 AM


Okay, this is good. The mirror effect is stunning. The words, breathtaking. All in all, you did good, buddy.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-12-07 12:25 PM


Outstanding JL!  What a cool concept! Love the poem

Lori

JL
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3 posted 2011-12-07 03:19 PM


Thanks Jerry!!
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Thank you Lori.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern
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4 posted 2011-12-07 03:41 PM


"penned word art"... that's the perfect description for this beautiful work!! *S*
JL
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5 posted 2011-12-07 03:43 PM


Thank you suthern for your keen observation and the very sweet words.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

jwesley
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6 posted 2011-12-07 07:55 PM


Very cool, my friend!

j.

Margherita
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7 posted 2011-12-08 08:40 AM


Brilliant, JL! The Soul is the true masterpiece no doubt and how well we do to listen and to dialogue!

Much enjoyed your talent here.

Margherita

JL
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8 posted 2011-12-09 09:23 AM


Thanks J. and Margherita.  I do appreciate your kindness.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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9 posted 2011-12-09 05:55 PM


I've heard the eyes are windows to the soul... but the mirror effect enhances that concept dramatically.  Well done.


Michael

ebonygirl
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10 posted 2011-12-11 08:02 PM


Within my soul is my core. Enjoyed your wonderful poem, JL,
Ms. E

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