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A Loving Love
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A Loving Love |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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concentration on anything but her is a big no for, summoning me is a woman I am quite taken with beautiful, penetrating blue eyes smile which seems to be directed at me only so I in my beguiled state engage this heavenly creature she exudes unto me much confidence cocky kind of rebel confidence like I used to have back in tha day gives me a special firmness in my feelings I had lost we have hasty tête-à-tête's lots of laughter, a few giggles and a give unto the other all we have the poems I write are from my blood a ripcord from my heart straight into hers for she is that distant shore a roiling, undulating, quite fascinating and playful oncoming tide my confessions for her ears only driven to her by choice and a promise of love it's as if they are the whisperings from the mists of my inner being my thoughts and feelings are like grains of sand she has awakened them they begin fresh each day she is my Muse opening doors I had closed she is the key if this isn't love, my friend what is? ©December 5, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry I am so happy for you. I'm happy for myself too...I get to read all this great new poetry you are writing!   Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aw, aren't you sweet, Lori. Thank you so much . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
some very, VERY good writing here (and 'slice-of-life' Romanticism) ! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You've made my day, , and I thank you for that. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
very good write, Jerry, the scramble yet eloquen nature of the poem reflects the relationship. But tread carefully my friend. Rebels have a tendance to, well rebel. ;-) make sure its not against you |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Well, since I am the rebel, I guess I had better keep a tight rein on myself, martiniat8. Thanks for stopping by. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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