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Charging Dead
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Charging Dead |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I took a walk to charge dead walked for miles down sundown town my mind on lovely when I walked out lovely gave me a lie said she could charge dead if I stayed I knew she lied, lovely had no depth she was, how you say, on-the-job-training dead needed more than frantic wishing sundown town gave way to country dirt kicked a Coors Light can down dusty kicking that can gave dead some grin with lovely on my mind I stepped up my pace seeking stunning ©November 29, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry? Is that you? Wow! Like your horse of a different color!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-30-2011 11:15 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"kicked a Coors Light can down dusty kicking that can gave dead some grin with lovely on my mind I stepped up my pace seeking stunning" And I bet lovely would appreciate this poem too. Very well written, vivid expressions. Enjoyed this very much, Jerry! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate you stopping by, JL, and taking a look at my crazy poetry. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is creative expression to the max. Enjoyed the scene, too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Nan, for your understanding comments. It is what we poets and dreamers live on, at least when it comes to our writings. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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