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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-11-29 08:00 AM



She didn't know her name
Or whether the wind had a word
for the way her eyes could make lives
fall one at a time

It was here
at the shallow hills of the west
streets of fast cars
the dizzying dresses that seemed
to recognize the far wind
like it was a cousin to the distant chill.

Those sweet cars of time
Shades on the trapeze of time
To hold her ankles
her name, she did not know

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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-11-29 12:36 PM


Tomer, I wish I had more info on your story, sounds interesting.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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