Open Poetry #47 |
Feelings From Within |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I think about you more than a little, And I miss you when you're away, A crease of worry deepens my brow, Simply because you are worth it. My liking you has turned inside out, It's more personal now than then, Don’t hardly remember all those days, You weren't around to be nice to me. I would like to lean into you, Taste your mouth upon mine, As we shared a sizzling embrace, Grinding our hips into the other. I don't like it that you are so far, I'd like for you to be next door, But miles of highway center lines, Can't diminish the passion within. I'd hate to know you were sad, And I couldn't kiss away the blues, And chase your worries all away, That would rip my heart asunder. I like your style, love who you are, Teenage butterflies flutter within me, Whenever we get a chance to speak, You are making my days complete. Thank you for being a part of me, You have no idea what you've done, Uplifted my life, gave it more pride, You're my friend, my lover, my pal. ©November 18, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You dive into the ocean here, leaving no trace of foam on the shoreline, just pure heart and soul |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for your marvelous comments and the wonderful way you chose your words, EmmaRose. ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, I am so happy for YOU! Lori |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..nothing like a heart lovingly expressing himself/herself..bravo..! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: They seem to accompany us through life and stir when we nourish them with feelings of love. It is amazing. Enjoyed this poem and love your pouring of grateful feelings and joy, dear Jerry. You are blessed. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. <><> Appreciate it, Spiros. <><> Margherita, I agree with you very much. ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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