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Open Poetry #47

Storm of Loneliness

Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member

since 2011-11-24

Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-11-26 07:32 AM

Storm of loneliness
Raging across my mind
The darkness foreclosing
As I close my eyes
That deafening sound of silence
Surrounds my thoughts at night
Starstruck I humbly cry
As the trenches of insanity
Filled with shattered hope
Wash away by heavy rain
A clear sky is coming
Maybe, I do not care
For as long the chilling coldness
Grips my soul to keep
There is no hope
No happiness
For one such as I...

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2011-11-26 09:53 PM

I liked your poem. Loneliness is indeed deafening, you described it well.
ms. e

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-11-26 11:29 PM

I am feeling a bit lonely tonight and your poem touched me inside. Thank you.

Alison

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-11-27 03:31 AM

Touching and insightful look at loneliness, JP. Many know the feeling but few describe it so well.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-11-27 03:50 AM

love the poem, the look at things and feelings, thank you for sharing,

yann

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