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Together Apart |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
I'm dissolved in the song of the rain - In the echoing beat of your heart. It's you pulse that still feels in my veins Every day spent together apart. Autumn alters the shades of the days, Seasons change - we remain all the same. An immaculate image portrays Sheer grief in a beautiful frame. I am kindling the candle of love, And the lighter replaces a match. See, in years it's getting too tough To create this immaculate sketch. Once your arms are a shelter for me, All my dreams have the space for us two. You're the shore to my bottomless sea, We're apart, but I'm there with you. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lovers and the distance grows wider, but love, at least for one, is strong. Nice work. ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Know this feeling...a thousand timesl...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
There are most certainly some magnificent images and lines in this ‘write’ ! … such as: “dissolv(ing) in the song of the rain” and: “Sheer grief in a beautiful frame” |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
The strong bond of love connects us even over the longest distance...  Like Night needs Day |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You write the contrast of physical distance with a strong emotional connection so beautifully! |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I enjoyed the warm sentiment of your poem |
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