Open Poetry #47 |
The Mirror |
Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Mommy, who is that man Walking the streets alone No place to call his own Mommy, who is that man So ragged and torn He seems so sad Mommy, who is that man Staring back at me Each time I look into the mirror... [This message has been edited by Just_little_Old_Me (11-25-2011 11:57 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Welcome to PIP! This is some strong stuff you brewed here. Nice work! Lori |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful, a beautiful questionning about relation with oneself, with mistery, enjoyed it, yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very profound and powerful thoughts here, Jean-Phillipe. Welcome to the sight. Ida |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jean-Phillippe...Welcome, I hope you plan on staying here at Passions awhile. You will see that we are all friendly and just one big family. Every now and then a few of us bite but only in a playful manner. Enjoyed the poem...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Welcone to PIP. You will find many good people here.Be yourself and let the words flow.jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
DITTO!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Thank you all for your kind words! I'm sorry I haven't been as active a member as I should be. Sadly enough the institution I'm living at only allows an half an hour of internet use a day, so it's a bit hard to read all of your beautiful poetry! I do promise I will read all of them, and leave a reply once I leave this place Like Night needs Day |
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