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Just_little_Old_Me
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since 2011-11-24
Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-11-25 09:17 AM



Mommy, who is that man
Walking the streets alone
No place to call his own

Mommy, who is that man
So ragged and torn
He seems so sad

Mommy, who is that man
Staring back at me
Each time I look into the mirror...

[This message has been edited by Just_little_Old_Me (11-25-2011 11:57 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-11-25 11:00 AM


Welcome to PIP!  This is some strong stuff you brewed here. Nice work!

Lori

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2011-11-25 01:15 PM


beautiful, a beautiful questionning about relation with oneself, with mistery, enjoyed it,

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-11-26 02:54 AM


Very profound and powerful thoughts here, Jean-Phillipe. Welcome to the sight.
                              Ida

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2011-12-01 06:01 PM


Jean-Phillippe...Welcome, I hope you plan on staying here at Passions awhile. You will see that we are all friendly and just one big family. Every now and then a few of us bite but only in a playful manner.
Enjoyed the poem...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2011-12-01 11:10 PM


Welcone to PIP. You will find many good people here.Be yourself and let the words flow.jo
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2011-12-02 08:45 AM


DITTO!!

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands
7 posted 2011-12-02 02:50 PM


Thank you all for your kind words! I'm sorry I haven't been as active a member as I should be. Sadly enough the institution I'm living at only allows an half an hour of internet use a day, so it's a bit hard to read all of your beautiful poetry! I do promise I will read all of them, and leave a reply once I leave this place

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

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