Open Poetry #47 |
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I'm not really here |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Like raindrops on a Winter's Day I hate it when I feel this way My soul reaching out for a ray of Light Yet my mind is as dark as night Staring through the looking-glass It feels like living in the past I don't belong neither here nor there While thoughts run rampant, everywhere Who am I? I really don't know Because I lost myself a long, long time ago Believe me that's not the saddest part I'm dead in reality, but living in my heart Like with a seashell you hear the rushing sea I'm nothing more then emotions rushing inside of me Invisible to the living, not wanted by the dead I live my life like a ghost instead Not to be remembered, not to be seen It's just like I have never been... [This message has been edited by Just_little_Old_Me (11-25-2011 11:55 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
We are kinsmen in that our thoughts seem to run along the same stretch of lonesome highway. I have made a detour toward a brighter day lately, however. Hope you will be able to do the same . . . ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Writing is a good way to release some of those troubling emotions. Hope you find a brighter way. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Depression, depersonalization, and especially 'de-realization' have been my lifelong 'dark-wolf' companions ... perhaps they are the "poet's curse"?! The very best way to keep them at bay is by doing acts of kindness ... especially the random, anonymous ones ... and, by writing fine 'poetry' that wafts along the immortal plain (that is not always 'self-focused') by celebrating nature, human diversity, and the universal 'connectedness' of everyone and everything across all scales of observation of this grand-scintillating universe, and also the commonalities of human needs and experiences. You and your writing are very important to us all. ... Write on! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yeah, what they said. Really tough stuff here...Nice work ![]() Lori |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm nothing more then emotions rushing inside of me Invisible to the living, not wanted by the dead I live my life like a ghost instead Not to be remembered, not to be seen It's just like I have never been... Observing without belonging, feeling meaningless... You capture this purgatory so well! |
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