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The Morning Light
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The Morning Light |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The Morning Light  A silent sunset begins its journey into the night. Peeking little bolts of orange, and golden rays of light… Sheltering peering eyes focused with enchantment, as papaya trees sway, beneath Mauna Loa’s rouge light… The sea sings its rhythmic melody, against white sands and rocky shore. While dolphins play as spirited children, near the ocean’s floor… Our thoughts touch and glimmer, at the lighting of a flickering torch. Our shared feelings are warmed and chilled, across a grassy porch… In the palms of my hand I rest your delicate features, while pressing our lips together, to become that evening’s creature… The scent of ginger and exotic tropical is whispering at the night air, as a cool breeze swims in off the ocean echoing through your hair… Gently we press into the night, into dreams of cotton candy. Where dreams are real and life is not, where reality is a flute of brandy… Until the day is new and waking is too, and the morning melody is true. Cooing a breath of the morning light me and you. In that morning light… . . .  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Where dreams are real and life is not, where reality is a flute of brandy…" A wonderful and compelling poem of love and love's rewards, JL. Loved it. ~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The scent of ginger and exotic tropical is whispering at the night air, as a cool breeze swims in off the ocean echoing through your hair… You just let me leave this cubicle behind and take a deep plumeria scented breath... This is softly sensuous and simply beautiful!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunshine is smiling... this is lovely, JL. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks Jerry! ------- Suthern, Please yes, leave that cubicle and dream. Just have someone lookout for the boss. ------- Thank you Sunshine. Your reply makes me smile. -------- Thanks James. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so breezy and tropical, exotic, seductive and sensual. Your poem premeates the air and stirs the senses, reaching across the miles. Getting the chills doesn't get any better than this. Absolutely gorgeous, JL~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
How sweet! Thank you Blues for airing out your sentiment. I'm smiling from ear to ear.  JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"Where dreams are real", very nice thought, JL Ms. e |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What a magical setting for dreams of love that carry you so romantically into the morning light ... Excellent. Margherita |
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