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Open Poetry #47

those soft knees

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-11-19 10:20 PM

She had a way about how her knees spread
with a soft elegance
like the ballet of moscow that transcends every winter eve

Her light skirt, wistful colors
Tailor made,
Right with the eyes of a newborn

She held her hand out
as the weather seemed to forge its head to the north
Those knees of Nepal
Oh, treat the lines between the shades of ruins gently
Don't kneel; let your knees be your voice

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-11-20 05:48 AM

Delightful and captivating.

Margherita

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2011-11-21 10:15 AM

Margh-

Happy you enjoyed..hope you're doing well.

Cheers

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-11-27 11:41 PM

Nice...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2011-11-28 05:33 AM

Thanks, James...appreciate the comment. Hope you're doing well

Cheers

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