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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2011-11-18 10:15 PM


You think you're better then me

A cat looms
The mouse dangles by her hairs
To much joy from pain

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
1 posted 2011-11-19 09:00 AM


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A masochist in love?

The Japanese have a saying:
even a mouse when cornered
will bite the cat.


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martiniat8
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2 posted 2011-11-19 03:33 PM


We all feel this.
Good write, straight to the heart and with so few words.

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2011-11-20 11:42 AM


HY

LOL maybe lol

M

Lol yah I was just bored and angsty

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
4 posted 2011-11-20 07:20 PM


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Juju,


Don't do yourself
any harm.


John


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Sunshine
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5 posted 2011-11-20 07:28 PM


My dear girl,

let those that think that thought
wither in their own remorse.




Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2011-11-20 08:04 PM


John,

I am not the type of person who would cause myself or anyone any pain, because I suffered enough in my life where it is not something I would want to cause my self.

The poem is a bout a person who has a mean streak and my distaste toward the behavior. I am not involved with that person, because of this behavior of this person so no worries about me.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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