Open Poetry #47 |
Still Winds |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Still Winds There was no wind as prairie chickens quickly dispersed having come to the newly formed pond to drink. Sunlight plays lovingly upon snow and ice, as in comfort of down and fur one can believe this is but sand on a deserted beached day. The trees will soon rot at their roots, falling over in shy of disappear, feeding new life that will evolve as spring waters gather from their natural runs, and pool, here, where I come to sit, in all seasons to listen to the wind even when there isn’t any. ~*~ (c) KRJ 12-26-02 |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..how lovely, Sunshine,so very lyric..>spiros |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
another beautifully painted piece of your unmistakable art Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
simply beautiful...love your ending line...it's perfect There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is such a beautiful picture you painted with these words. I truly enjoyed the read!!! When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
You reach out to each individual reader and touch them with your own special way. Nicely done. ~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~ |
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AlCowie Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92London, UK |
A painting on a canvas to interpret, thoughts of now and thoughts of soon, beauty and nature, loved it. |
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