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HippinTrippy
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since 2010-03-26
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0 posted 2011-11-17 06:06 PM


It's been a while since I've posted anything.. A lot has changed since then. I met someone wonderful and I quit smoking, so expect some more writing to be done in the near future.

I started this in the spur of a moment, I want to add onto it yet but the rest has yet to come to me.


To wake up in a dream
Being with you is unreal
Easily some of the best feelings
I've ever had the pleasure to feel

What can I say about your eyes
That I have not said before
Every time I gaze at them
I fall for you even more

You inspire such great feelings
...The words do not exist
The softest skin I've touched
The sweetest lips I've kissed

I feel so much better always
Knowing you love me too
We're going to be together
Whatever I have to do

Being with you is magical
And you've got me under your spell
The feelings that I have for you
I'll never be able to tell

I can only hope that you feel them
I will try my hardest to show
And for every second spent with you
My feelings only grow

The night you said you love me
That moment was So intense!
I thought about it for a moment
It was the only thing that made sense

When I said I love you back
I'm so glad you didn't explode
As I held you in my arms that night
Your heart and mine were sewed.

It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell.

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suthern
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1 posted 2011-11-18 11:15 AM


Being with you is magical
And you've got me under your spell
The feelings that I have for you
I'll never be able to tell

If you can't speak them, hand her this... it tells your love beautifully.

HippinTrippy
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since 2010-03-26
Posts 103
New York
2 posted 2011-11-18 05:31 PM


Thank you Suthern. If only these words could suffice as to how I feel for her.. The words truly do not exist..
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