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Turning of the Gears
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Turning of the Gears |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
"Amazing", the readers, they thought after one meeting, one message the gears began to turn a plan that was forming in the velky (large) foreign man His thoughts for his next dialogue, Preparing for their next conversation "Maybe you should think about moving to Texas" "to return to your best friend" "Have you ever thought of leaving Prague to get away from your ex?" "Do you think that Prague is the best place to raise children?" "My friends are like family, which is more important?" "Where and what is the best place for you, a family?" he was thinking to, towards, the displaced Czexan after one coffee meeting planning a future together with a newly divorced woman??? "You MUST be joking", the readers and audience, spoke, "too fast too fast!". But these are important questions "for the story, of course, for the story. for the story... of COURSE", the scribe subscribed. He sluffed off, speaking to himself with an air of nonchalance He'd never admit the truth, the plan, the appeal these are questions of his own, pondered, with zeal No, the truth is, he isn't living his life for a book for the story, for a play, for an effort to be more interesting He's just a man trying to write for a friend for himself for love for life So, its just a hypothesis, An interesting possibility, an interesting and beautiful woman a midst interesting coincidences as the world turns... [This message has been edited by martiniat8 (11-17-2011 06:13 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
He's just a man trying to write for a friend for himself for love for life And that could be any of us.  Personally, I'm a fan of interesting possibilities. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"He'd never admit the truth, the plan, the appeal these are questions of his own, pondered, with zeal No, the truth is, he isn't living his life for a book for the story, for a play, for an effort to be more interesting" The gears are turning. Very interesting write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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