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The Back Rub
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The Back Rub |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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I know your day was a hard one That machine 'bout beat you to death You gotta be achin' all over So I've been thinkin' 'bout what'd make you feel better A long hot shower to start If you want I can wash your back Then I lovingly recommend a back rub You know the ones where you get rubbed to heaven or oblivion LGR(C)11/15/11 |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, the images you create....very nice, Lori!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sounds like a winner to me. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now you're the kind of woman a man wants to come home to!   Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice writing, Lori. Enjoyed! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Smiling to your words and to Linda's reply. Oh-yeah-do-that-baby ... must have been the reaction! Relaxing and stirring all at once. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... Who could resist?? That sounds like a great way to spend the evening... whether giving or receiving! |
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