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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-11-15 05:30 AM



Her warm breathe was often seen
through the tears of the Himalayan

The eyes of a long, roasted night
latin onto her back
with a skin so soft,
the language became lost.

© Copyright 2011 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-11-15 11:12 AM


I thought, on the first few readings that I didn't understand this at all, beautiful though it is, but with several more readings, I began to understand a corner of its soul, like feeling the heart-words of a wordless piano sonata.

Owl

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-11-19 10:18 PM


Owl, I appreciate what you took from the piece...your words are always taken to heart.  Take care

Cheers

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