Open Poetry #47 |
Michael Falvo |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I can wish upon the stars to make the tears subside Or dare I ask the sun to follow you and lift you up The sorrow inside may never leave yet soften I hope over time For time is but a thing a moment we pass through We breathe, hearts beat and we pray for a certain peace sustaining this life we keep with the thoughts of love In the end it is love we hold the moments we have kissed the times we have hugged the I love yous we mean When the days are done we shall meet again in peace holding hands in the light Sharing the brightness of the stars |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
quote: This went straight to my heart... beautifully bittersweet!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully done. I'm in great admiration (that's awe to most) of this kind of precise poetry and its message. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is so sad. I read the story about Michael Falvo in the Mt Shasta News. You have truly paid a beautiful tribute. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michael, Children never walk alone, and sometimes children can be of any given age...I can only hope that the drive that gave this child the gift to walk a dangerous slope at this time of year was because he believed in a gift beyond his years. Thank you for sharing your thoughts... sometimes I miss my home state so much, and this is one of those times. Love, K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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