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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-11-11 10:23 PM


Me

Sometimes I feel lonely
and at those times
when I feel lonely
I want to be with someone,
someone I care for,
someone that has the
same interests as me
so we can share experiences.
A person that enjoys who
I am outside & inside,
a person that feels comfortable
in the presence of my personality,
a person that is not offended by
the thoughts I think,
the words I say,
the actions I take.
A person that just accepts me
for who I am and likes that person,
the person that is me.

JamesLee
07November
2011

or

The Person That
Is Me.






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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-11-11 10:24 PM


I guess we all more or less have these same feelings, James. Some of us are lucky in that regard, some, sadly, are not.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2011-11-11 10:25 PM


Hi Me, nice to meet you. I'm Me too.



just being silly but I know what you mean

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2011-11-12 07:36 AM


loneliness has it's own unique form of comfort too, james, and sometimes it's a pleasant thing.

Enjoyed,

j.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-11-12 07:45 AM


Very good thoughts. Of course "the one" will also express herself in this way or be cherishing the same dream. So, good luck! (or ... in the name of love you will both put the priority of making each other happy and that means - without the slightest doubt - shortening of one's freedom and at least every now and then a compromise, there is no other way!)

Love,
Margherita

suthern
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5 posted 2011-11-12 08:05 PM


I understand this longing... beautiful write! *S*
JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2011-11-13 12:08 PM


"A person that just accepts me
for who I am and likes that person,
the person that is me."

Nice write, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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7 posted 2011-11-14 02:19 PM


I guess loneliness is universal.  This speaks so loudly, and for all of us.

Enjoyed the read.


Michael

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