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Open Poetry #47

What You Are To Me

HippinTrippy
Member

since 2010-03-26

Posts 103
New York

0 posted 2011-11-11 08:27 PM

I'm feeling like a bum, and you're someone sparing change.
Sharing what you have with me, giving hope in the exchange.

I am like a plant, and you are my shining sun.
Feeling cold without you, as if the night has come.

I'm like a kid in high school, and you're my final bell.
Waiting to hear your voice again, to assure me all is well.

I'm like a desert nomad, and you're my guiding star.
When you're in sight, everything is right.
'Tho I feel lost when you are far

I feel as though I've been halved, and you make up the rest.
I await the moment we're together again, so I can be at my best.

Thoughts inspired by missing my love, and sitting in a laundry mat. =)

~ Joshua

It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell.

[This message has been edited by HippinTrippy (11-12-2011 08:34 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-11-12 08:04 AM

You were most beautifully inspired while waiting for the laundry ...

The longing is deeply felt.

Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2011-11-12 08:14 AM

Nicely spoken, my friend.
Enjoyed the read...

j.

[This message has been edited by jwesley (11-12-2011 10:12 AM).]

HippinTrippy
Member

since 2010-03-26

Posts 103
New York

3 posted 2011-11-12 08:36 AM

Thank you both very kindly.

What can I say, she is most inspiring. =)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-11-12 08:21 PM

giving hope in the exchange.

That's a beautiful gift she gives you... no wonder you're inspired!

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