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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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tonight, after the lima beans and cornbread give me a chance to leave you breathless; reaching for the stars only sound in the room the rapid beating of your heart 'twill be a night to live forever the greatest lovers of history will hang their heads in abject shame I'm not talking about this thing called love oh no, no, no, I'm talking about sensual insanity I'm not looking for stimulation I mean to have euphoria in the form of two covered-with-sweat-bodies locked in utter madness and, after this night you won't remember our sweat-filled hysterics no every time our eyes meet each time you think of me if you hear my name mentioned you will experience this night as though it were happening to you again you will need to find somewhere to sit before your knees give way to primitive pleasure ©November 7, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You Don Juan, Cassanova type hottie you! You are going to need a stick to beat the ladies off if you keep writing like this my friend. Whew! Lovin' it!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Why in the world would I ever want to beat them off,my friend Lori? Haha Gotta love it . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
My bad, silly me...Go get'em stud Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heehee . . . Gotta love it twice . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good grief! With hubby away, I need to stop reading stuff like this! But lima beans and cornbread! I can do that!!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! You are funny, in a non-funny situation (hubby away), but But lima beans and cornbread ain't bad, passing shadows. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I'm having problems picturing you like this, JP. Mostly because I refuse to try... lol. I'll just echo Lori on this one... Go gettum stud! Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Well Michael, I don't know what to tell you. But you are correct, picturing me like this is a stretch. I'm old and what I just described in my poem would probably kill me outright. Be that as it may, I wrote it. It is a poem. Do ALL POEMS HAVE TO BE FACTUALLY REAL, MICHAEL? ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wow, it sure got warm in here! LOL Talk about wearing a permanent grin... that would do it! LOL |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm grinning, suthern, at your response. Thanks for commenting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, James ~*~ Money cannot buy happiness but its more comfortable to cry in a Mercedes than on a bicycle ~*~ |
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