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Tremolo
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Tremolo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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My smile my teeth might fall in flank nightmare's clench could fleck and sprout gums of loose roots in my mouth: My teeth could fall in flank. My hair might frizzle and reside in clover burrs caught in my brush in waft to floor in spiral sighs as I scrape my scalp for shine. I might be vigorous in vain- and crusty scabs leave their cremain in silver combs, with pearl. My eyes of blue will search for you. My ears will tune to hear your voice. I'll sponge my aged skin (so thin) with talcum sprinkled over cream-- smeared in circles that I feared when I was young and I wrote this and music was my very name-- a signature upon your lips? Tremolo in three quarter time. Remember me. Remember, this-- "I love you, love." And numbers wish to be so misaligned. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Serenity... you always will be remembered by me lovely! Awesome writing... Bisous RDB xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent...reminds me of the feel of silk, and sipping Tia Maria...very smooth, and enjoyable. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My eyes of blue will search for you. My ears will tune to hear your voice. I'll sponge my aged skin (so thin) with talcum sprinkled over cream-- smeared in circles that I feared when I was young and I wrote this and music was my very name-- You have the ability to go straight to my heart with your words... you may write your life, but oh, it touches mine. And because it does, I can say with conviction... remembering is guaranteed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The music never stops, as you demonstrate so very well, dear Karen! Impressive and poignant. Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: This year, I will be [0]6 Next year, I will be 16 again... Then the next year 26... then the year after that, 36... and in those three years, I will know how swiftly the first three decades truly passed... because I am still there at any given time of day. Sending my love, lovie.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
""I love you, love."" In 3/4 time. Trill and vibrato. Enjoyed your write. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh..oh...yes...YES...i have missed reading You |
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