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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-11-06 12:49 PM


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This
November night
Is calm dark
And still

The clock strikes
Nothing at all
With anxiousness

None of its time
In daylight’s hues
Spent mitigating
Past mistakes

A good book
Beside the bed
A glass of wine
A sense of being
Quietly at home
In the heart

An autumn moon
Slowly rises
Above the trees

Thank you
For my life


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1 posted 2011-11-06 04:46 PM


A sense of being
Quietly at home
In the heart

That's a beautiful place to be!

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-11-06 05:04 PM


Every life is a blessing.
Especially poets who are thankful and say it.
You hit the mark.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2011-11-07 10:59 AM


Gratitude in your words has a very special appeal.


Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
4 posted 2011-11-07 12:04 PM


I liked this alot.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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