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Had We Met
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Had We Met |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I would write about our great romance. Things like: The first time you asked me to dance, that first kiss, "our song," the way you broke my heart when it all went wrong. I would write about the one I can't forget... Had we met. Ida Werrett |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ya had me going, Ida, until the "Had me met." (Maybe its "we" instead of "me?" A very likable poem with a catch. Those are the best kind. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thanks, Jerry for the input and for correcting my typo. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The "what ifs" in life leave me with a sense of wonder. Your poem is full of grace and a special kind of tenderness. Lovely thoughts, Ida~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you, Blues. I am always happy when you comment. Ida |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Awe... An inspiring look into the questioning heart. I am a hopeless romantic. I believe that "someone" is out there for everone, and one should never give up hoping for that meeting. Here's hoping. Michael |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful write of "if only"!!  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Well, I was surprised too. Great write. Enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Ida, so lovely to read your work again... you have a beautiful way with words... Bisous RDB xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I adore your acumen, dear Ida. And I bet you have met  , but I guess the heart has not been broken and isn't that a good thing! Whatever you write about, you do it in your own special creative way. Always a pleasure to read you. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your lovely replies. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear Ida Belle, if only he HAD met you, he would have been a very fortunate man!!!  So tender and romantic! Love you! Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Maybe you just have not met him yet. Maybe... A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
If I met him now he would be past the expiration date and vice-versa. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
lol, dear Ida, so cute your last comment! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Hahaha! You are too cool, and I'm thinking it's his loss!  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem Ida, I think you can see through those "had we ever met" men, Do you give classes in this? LOL Ms, e |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I truly had to smile reading this; I feel like thoughts were plucked right out of my own mind. Thank you, I enjoyed this. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. interesting 'write' ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this!!, my friend. j. |
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