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Dinosr
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0 posted 2011-11-06 12:24 PM



Mystic Love


Mystic powers play the role,
forever present in the soul;
to quite fears or pay the toll,
that rules our belief.

To wonder is the present power,
to stay within our given hour;
to taste the sweet and then the sour,
to harvest our relief.

So when the tongs of love unfold,
the heart won't reason when it's told;
no limits to the young or old,
then turns to grim delight.

But mystic is the thoughts that be,
if love is good or misery;
depending on the things we see,
in mist that is the night.

The heart must choose as it is said,
to join the living, not the dead;
and live on love that's always lead,
A love that won't get old.

For mystic powers always send,
a message to your magic friend;
and mates a love that will not end,
a partner of the soul.





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Michael
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1 posted 2011-11-06 03:47 PM


quote:
The heart must choose as it is said,
to join the living, not the dead;



That's the secret, right there.  A loving heart doesn't have to be miserably sad... just refocused, that its love may be appreciated, and returned.


Nice write.


Michael

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2 posted 2011-11-06 05:13 PM


I like this very much, Karl... and Michael's response is absolutely right!
JL
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3 posted 2011-11-06 05:46 PM


“A love that won't get old.
a partner of the soul.”

Amen to that!
Enjoyed, Karl.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Dinosr
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since 2011-10-08
Posts 68
Yavapai, Arizona
4 posted 2011-11-06 08:28 PM


To All,

Thanks for your thoughts and
comments.

Just another soul trying to explain,
in a few words, something that can't
be explained.
                       Karl

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