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ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-10-30 11:06 PM

BREATHE

Breathe into me

life, love, song, love long

Breathe within me

heart, soul, long, soul song

Breathe through me

truth, patience, mine

Breathe behind me

paths, forgiving kind
E.M.L.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-30 11:11 PM

It is all a matter of how to breath and where exactly to breathe so as not to cause problems. Not so here. You spelled out out perfectly. Good show, ms e.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2011-10-30 11:12 PM

Thank you Jerry for your kind words,
ms. e

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-10-30 11:19 PM

Returning your great comments tonight, ms e., we're going to have to stop meeting like this, huh? People will stop to wonder. Just kidding, of course. This is a great place to meat.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-10-30 11:37 PM

Very nice, my friend...that's what it's all about, isn't it...

j.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-10-31 11:03 AM

Breathe behind me
paths, forgiving kind

How very lovely! And how very loving... I like this very much!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-11-01 06:46 AM

It's all in the breath indeed, all the life giving force. You say it so beautifully, dear Ebonygirl.

Enjoyed this lovely plea.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-11-01 10:22 AM

kewl strum ms

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2011-11-02 06:09 PM

I especially like how you ended this one.

Without forgiveness, breath is no longer essential.

Michael

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2011-11-02 07:06 PM

Love this poem.
Very, very nice.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2011-11-06 08:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

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