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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-01-23 04:51 PM

Around the corner
from the back of my mind
an effervescent inkling
illuminates my awareness
plumbing the depths
of your love for me
finding
that perhaps
your love is deeper
than my heart
can see

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (01-23-2011 05:42 PM).]

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-23 05:31 PM

I misread the poem the first time. It is all about hope as The_Doctors_Angel_32 said below.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat (01-24-2011 11:33 AM).]

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-23 05:53 PM

This is beautifully written. Too me this tells about a hope that love will grow.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-01-23 07:26 PM

I always have liked "perhaps" poems.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-23 09:40 PM

...and that's a good thing, a very good thing...a lovely write, well expressed

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-01-23 11:02 PM

"Around the corner from the the back of my mind" Love it.
Ida

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-01-23 11:04 PM

beautifully written with a great ending...wonderful work, Lori

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2011-01-24 12:17 PM

Can't judge a book by it's cover.
Clever writing Lori

Like it very much.

Eric

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-01-24 08:16 AM

Hey everybody! Thank you so much for reading my poem and all your comments. It is interesting to me to see the diversity of responses and feed back. I can't thank you enough for suporting my work!
Lori

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