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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-04 10:23 AM




When time is long on my mind
and all other things have fallen behind
The here and now claims me
to my heart to see
the sweetness of you there
and the passions you bare
that leaves me weak
unable to speak
So in my silent revelry
is where my smile will be

LGRĀ©11/4/11


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-11-04 10:45 AM


If you leave it up to your smile, my friend, you leave it in a good place. You're letting your beauty show here, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-11-04 10:52 AM


Aren't you sweet this morning! Thank you Jerry!

Lori

Michael
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3 posted 2011-11-04 03:57 PM


You are generally so outspoken it's hard for me to imagine you in silent reverie.  Still, it's a pleasureable image.  Nice to see "that" side.


Michael

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2011-11-04 08:06 PM


"So in my silent revelry
is where my smile will be"

Well...
Party-on, eh!


Enjoyed your "Silent Revelry"
And it is a cute smile too...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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