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We Have Some Time
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We Have Some Time |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Loveliness caught me staring vivid emerald eyes stared back unblinking asking the unasked touching my soul deeply saying she understood approved of this visual tête-à-tête Meandering stream rippling surface current beneath antediluvian oak laden with vibrant green leaves nature's awning a blanket spread impending lovers cool gentle zephyr unable twin passion to impede My trembling hand she took to her breast natural crimson lips touched my bone dry mouth lingered there tasting of jasmine sachet tentative tongue scorched mine set off simultaneous sighs We have some time whispered mouth against my ear hot against passion spent tangled skirt twisted pants strewn hodgepodge here and there I knew not words to answer Old am I now life lived did survive never forgot nameless girl ancient oak summer days of love tender and good jasmine smells memory haunted by her words We have some time ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Time is all any of us has my friend...it is all in the spending  Glad you took the time to write this.Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am happy you took the time to read and comment on it, Lori, thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have rendered this sweet memory most beautifully, dear Jerry. I bet the location under that old oak who witnessed the scene remained forever impressed along with the deep emotions. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That old oak probably smiled a lot at the memories we left beneath it, Margherita. Thank you for your special comments. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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