Open Poetry #47 |
Sometime You |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Sometime You Somewhere in time and space I will be able to embrace With the love in my heart for you Feelings that you know are true. I will be there when you emit the tears Standing next to all your fears I’ll be there for you Time will pass, as you will see Knowing that it’s always me There’s a moment that will come Your heart will beat the same drum Even when you’re happy and full of cheer You will see that I’ll be near I’ll be there for you As our age becomes in time You will see my love still chimes When our bodies are old and used Even when our minds confused Promise of the hearts love made for two Stuck together just like old fashion glue I’ll be there for you . . . Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think this might be your very best... It's absolutely beautiful... and going into my library! *S* |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you suthern |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"As our age becomes in time You will see my love still chimes When our bodies are old and used Even when our minds confused Promise of the hearts love made for two Stuck together just like old fashion glue I’ll be there for you" Excellent write! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Thank you JL |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautifully expressed Bernie! a song in the making even! :-) Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Thank you RDB |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is so sweet - gives me hope. A |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sweet bernie |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A beautiful rendering of your emotion... "stuck like glue" is a lovely place to be. Nicely done. Michael |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you alison |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you passing shadows and michael |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poignant, as it is soaked in heart's sincerity and beauty. Margherita |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you Margherita |
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