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Open Poetry #47

Tonight into Tomorrow

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-10-30 11:04 PM

one day surges into another
who isn't expecting it
that makes things awkward
throws everything off kilter
best-laid plans
go belly up
say the wrong things

not your best day

©October 30, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2011-10-30 11:08 PM

Looking forward towards tomorrows,
enjoyed your poem, JP
ms. e

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-10-30 11:09 PM

Yeah, ms e, we all hope tomorrow comes.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-10-31 06:20 AM

Sorry you had a bad day my friend

hope today is better

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-10-31 08:09 AM

It will be, Lori, thanks.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2011-10-31 08:32 AM

enjoyed this

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-10-31 08:35 AM

Thank you, bslicker.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2011-10-31 11:07 AM

We've all been there... and it's no fun whatsoever. Hope a new day brings better times!!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-10-31 11:37 PM

It did suthern, it most surely did. Thank you.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

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