Open Poetry #47 |
kneading with wanting |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the winds says you were harvesting from the evening gathering the warm milk of melting moon and pressing it into your long limb vase there to be the gazelle on sprinting fever of dawn sumatra was a scent of leather with warm love as if it had been savored to pinch flavors and your lips were in that shape of around with laughter splashing from chin to bosom you wrote dare me words in the sand of time licking your finger after with seduction said the sand was like sugar how it stung and left that grit of remembering me along said it left an itch in your womb with room for more kinds of crazy wanting to a place for my secret to ruin your edges and find things you really wanted to need and sometimes you kneaded them with wanting ___________________ daark |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you wrote dare me words in the sand of time I haven't written secrets on the shore for the waves to wash away in keeping for a long time... but this reminds me... and a trip to sand might just be in order. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...thanks lady...you are always welcome here...this sand is catless.. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this makes me want to slip into the giant sandman and let him have his way with me |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ER....thank you for the eyes ms |
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Eusta B. Mae 2 Junior Member
since 2011-10-20
Posts 15state of confusion |
"a place for my secret to ruin your edges and find things you really wanted to need" Tell me your secret, I'll show ..er,um, tell you mine. ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms elm, something out of evil woman song? Thanks ms |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Mr. Dark, what have you found lately? Enjoyed your poem, ms. e |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E....nothing lost, so nothing found...thanks ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: There are always these incredibly creative passages in all of your works. True abundance of poetic highs. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend |
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