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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-10-30 09:48 AM

I imagine warm murmurs on the wind
Arousing her from serenity's sleep.
She arises to begin the day's call,
Into the kitchen for coffee she creeps.

Does she know the spell she has cast on me,
As she treads softly into the day's grip?
I see her in moon's luminescent glow
As the coffee begins its steady drip.

Music filters into my thoughts of her;
Simple two-step played out on the dance floor
I see her stop, tilt her head as if she
Can hear the waltz as she stands by the door.

Coffee in hand, my dear sits down to zip,
Head moving slightly, the music still there.
She begin to hum a song with no name,
With a wry smile she's suddenly aware.

The music stopped as she remembers why
It was there in the first place; sent to her.
Her delightful smile fills her face with glee,
She begins to hum again, almost purr.

©October 30, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-10-30 09:58 AM

hummmmmmmmmmmm, now this is sweet Jerry! Loving your inspiration. You go guy!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-10-30 10:06 AM

Thank you Lori for stopping by so early in the day.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-10-30 07:17 PM

You made her smile, and
she is beautiful,
and your memory of her
is grandiferous....

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-10-30 07:33 PM

Sunshine, thank you for gracing my page with your lovely presence. I appreciate your thoughts on my poem and for voicing them.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-10-30 09:30 PM

What a serene snapshot!

Beautiful work!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-10-30 09:38 PM

Thanks again, suthern, you've been all over the place tonight. You are appreciated.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Paul D. Hennigan
Member

since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

7 posted 2011-10-30 10:37 PM

Delightful memories. I like!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-10-30 10:42 PM

Thanks, Paul.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

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