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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2011-10-28 11:39 PM



Perfect Pitch

I hear your heart
across the room
or miles away
it sings to me
in perfect pitch

"I wish that I was beautiful or you were half way blind"
Harry Chapin



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-10-29 07:47 AM


Perfect is the word for this, in "pitch" on in stye and words. Great!

~*  The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon, but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes  ~*~

Margherita
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2 posted 2011-10-29 07:58 AM


The magic of deep connection.

Lovely!

Margherita

jwesley
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3 posted 2011-10-29 09:39 AM


Perfect Pitch, my friend, heart listening.

j.

Michael
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4 posted 2011-10-29 03:42 PM


It's a lovely thing to be in tune with someone's heart.  Perfection, indeed.


Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2011-10-29 06:01 PM


I love this! Simply beautiful!

Lori

JL
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6 posted 2011-10-29 07:23 PM


Yep!
I agree with Lori, perfectly beautiful.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2011-10-30 01:50 AM


Beautifully said!
Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2011-10-30 10:33 AM


Lovely heart words, you're in perfect rhythm slick one!
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9 posted 2011-10-30 08:20 PM


What a gem you've written here... few lines, big message... and so beautiful!!
ebonygirl
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10 posted 2011-10-30 10:36 PM


"in perfect pitch" is the song that resonates with the one,
enjoyed, ms. e

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