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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-10-27 02:41 PM


A mixture of homemade ice cream
Some of it dripping down your chin
You reach down and snare it with your finger
Slurp it back in again
Can there be anything better than homemade ice cream
It's almost sinfully exciting
Give you a feeling akin to ecstasy
As bits of it keeps missing your mouth
Making things messy
Ah, but that is the joy of the moment
The sloppy moments of oozing ice cream
On a hot sultry day
Be careful now
Don't trip over that garden hose

©October 27, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton


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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
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1 posted 2011-10-27 02:45 PM


Ice cream and garden hose, interesting I remember when....
enjoyed, ms. e

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2011-10-27 02:45 PM


One thing about ice cream is that you can enjoy it all year round. mmmmm

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-10-27 02:46 PM


Those remembrances can be good, huh, ms. e? Thanks . . .

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Yes indeed, Lori, ice cream is an all purpose treat.

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2011-10-27 09:47 PM


Remember those days well, my friend. Only thing better'n that was watching my kids experience it!!

Well done.

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
5 posted 2011-10-27 09:55 PM


Yes indeed our passion is our kids passion, up to a certain extent, jwesley. Thanks for being here.

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