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Pweisbrod
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since 2011-10-14
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0 posted 2011-10-14 10:40 AM



Couldn't access my old user stuff. decided to write. here it is.


"My Cheerleader."


My wife is amazing.
Because she's tolerant.
Because all my hobbies are expensive
especially duck hunting,
and all the other ones, too.

My wife is amazing,
because she loves me
even though I'm bad at the only job
that I've ever liked,
which is being a good husband.

My wife is amazing,
because she always finds a way
to try and make me look nice for church,
look nice for work,
even if I refuse to do it.

My wife is amazing,
because she loves terrible jokes
and crying during sad movies
and she hits me
when I tell her she's a nerd.

My wife is amazing
Because she manages elegance
when I can't be strong anymore.
Because she saves my life
every day that I can't do it for myself.

My wife is amazing
because she is an encourager
my cheerleader
even if she doesn't like what she's cheering for.
My last computer fried and I lost every poem in my library. I haven't written in over a year probably. here ye go. 1 crappy poem, comin' right up!

Too strung out on compliments, overdosed on confidence.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-10-14 02:32 PM


Aha...you were viking_metal. Hello Paul.

I've done a little sleuthing, and I've sent you an email. It may make your day.

Sunshine

P.S. - Welcome back!

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-10-14 02:53 PM


"My wife is amazing
Because she manages elegance
when I can't be strong anymore.
Because she saves my life
every day that I can't do it for myself."

What a lucky guy you are!
Nice write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Pweisbrod
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3 posted 2011-10-14 04:33 PM


Thanks to both of you.

Thanks for the list email, too

Too strung out on compliments, overdosed on confidence.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2011-10-14 10:31 PM


You're very welcome!
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2011-10-14 11:32 PM


Not bad for a slacker poet, lOL.  You always write from the heart so well. I've been away awhile too.  Welcome back.
Pweisbrod
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6 posted 2011-10-17 09:48 AM


Thanks TD
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7 posted 2011-10-24 12:40 PM


Hey!  It's such a nice surprise to come across your poem, Paul.  First, congratulations on your wife (your very tolerant wife, it sounds like).  Second, how nice to read your crappy ass poetry again!!!

Missed reading you
Ali-boo

Pweisbrod
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8 posted 2011-10-27 10:13 PM


Ali-BAM, thanks!

Too strung out on compliments, overdosed on confidence.

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