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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-26 10:09 PM



when I think of her
a million stars write her name
under my eyelids




~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-27 06:24 AM


100% Grade A romantic

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-10-27 07:24 AM


Yeah, thank you, Lori, I'm getting gushy it seems.

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2011-10-27 07:32 AM


oh wow! this is beautifully written! :-)

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-10-27 07:33 AM


Many thanks, Roniece, for your lovely comments.

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-10-29 11:58 AM


Enchanting, dear Jerry!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-29 12:03 PM


Good to see you, Margherita, and thank you very much for your kind words.
jwesley
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7 posted 2011-10-29 12:45 PM


Gee, Jerry, I've so many under my eye lids . . .

Really ... COOL WRITE!

j.

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-10-29 12:49 PM


Hahahahaha!!

I hear ya, jwesley, thanks.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon, but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

Michael
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9 posted 2011-10-29 03:04 PM


Some memories outshine all the others, they do.

Beautifully done.


Michael

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2011-10-29 04:48 PM


Thank you for stopping by, Michael. And yes, you are correct.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

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