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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-26 02:57 PM


She batted her baby blues
at his deep dark browns
hoping for a spark
to meet her twinkle
She sashayed to his saunter
just to get the time of day
inviting his curious
out to play


LGR©10/25/11
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-26 03:13 PM

Curious was Lori
It goes good with Chablis
And you think he has flair
Your twinkle you will share

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-10-26 03:25 PM

Ha! Gotta love it Jerry! Thanks

Lori
Michael
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3 posted 2011-10-26 06:38 PM

You sashay beautifully, Lori.  your boldness is wonderfult to witness.


Michael
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-26 08:49 PM

Thanks Michael that is high praise coming from you. Yikes! lol

Lori
suthern
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5 posted 2011-10-27 08:32 AM

Can she teach me some of those moves? LOL

Enjoyed this! *S*
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-10-27 08:50 AM

Easier read than done! lol! Thanks *S*

Lori
ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-10-27 02:40 PM

LOL, Liked what Suthern said, I to would like to learn,
enjoyed, ms. e
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2011-10-30 09:56 PM

Very nice...James
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