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Open Poetry #47

depth of dawn

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-26 09:35 AM

it is the truth in your eyes, lady dawn
that mends my bending of male skin
that place of not caring of what is around

that moan song place of shuddering
where your hem is helpless to conceal
and your breasts bare themselves boldly

it is that fever place of sigh song music
when your fingers strum the drum of you
and punish what you say is not easily broken

but you make the river run from that brim
reaching inside the well of your wanting
and pulling my mind from its pricking

returning it again, but with deeper urgency

___________

daark

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-10-26 09:45 AM

Now I'm happy...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-10-26 10:07 AM

Sweetsun, happy is good, thanks babe

Eusta B. Mae 2
Junior Member

since 2011-10-20

Posts 15
state of confusion

3 posted 2011-10-26 10:32 AM

I'm happy too

but with "deeper urgency" now! ebm

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-10-26 11:11 AM

ms ebm, thank you for reaching in ms

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-10-27 02:51 PM

Enjoyed your poem Dark,
ms.e

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-10-27 02:53 PM

Ms E, I enjoyed your eyes here

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