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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-23 08:13 PM



with midnight whispers
all things seem right with the world
and mint-flavored breath

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-23 10:00 PM


Jerry,

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-10-23 10:08 PM


Thanks, Lori.

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

JL
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3 posted 2011-10-24 03:57 PM


I agree with Lori, with one small addition:


JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-10-24 04:54 PM


Hahaha! Gotta love it, JL, gotta love it. Thanks . . .

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2011-10-30 05:13 AM


oh I love these 3 liners by you Jerry!! They are just beautiful and have so much meaning! love it!!
Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-30 07:26 AM


Hi Roniece, thank you very much for stopping by, it means a lot to me.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

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