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Open Poetry #47

Souls so Quiet

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-10-21 04:28 PM

They sat like souls so quiet
they could feel each others hands moving
even as they stared into each others eyes

August of the earth
the symbol of such love
eyes onto the river sea

Souls with such blood
with love at its highest right

Its highest night
I could long before the heavens came to fall

Long before her eyes were next to mine
She sat so quietly
The earth felt just enough tonight
just enough for two souls to be one of life

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-21 05:52 PM

This is very good. You captures the essence of two into one.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

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